Be Warned Children

Be Warned Children

A Poem by Mercutio

This poem describes the difficulties one faces in romance,life,and with self demons. Or basically everything thats happened to me in the last month.

....Lack of concentration...
I can no longer stay in control
The f*****g beast has me in a hold
Be warned children , for I have lost control
Oh as Romeo once said ,"I am fortunes fool "
Love has used me once more as its f*****g tool
I can no longer comprehend this ill fate
Because I just lost my f*****g date.
Until I can once more defend
This is once more
the end

© 2014 Mercutio

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Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked the semi-whimsical nature of this poem, and how it's vaguely acrostic. It was also humorous with the use of warning children. Well done, Mercutio.

Posted 6 Years Ago

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6 Years Ago

Thank you,brother!

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Added on June 4, 2014
Last Updated on June 4, 2014
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