First Look

First Look

A Poem by Merovech
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Love at first sight, slays the heart, makes for the future From when I met MerrilySpinning.

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she drew my attention
Unwittingly
but, it was done

my goal lay before me
Unattainable
or, so she thought

read the rules, gently pressed
Unwavering

for I will play her game
and win

© 2017 Merovech


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Bravo, that was better than I was expecting.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Merovech

6 Years Ago

Unwittingly
Unattainable
Unwavering

All adjectives, I think.
Bluefire

6 Years Ago

That's very clever, you're welcome
Merovech

6 Years Ago

Updated.

How do I increment version numbers?

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Added on July 3, 2017
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Merovech
Merovech

King George, VA



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