What I See

What I See

A Poem by Meshalini
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What I see in the conflict countries...

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I do not see Gods,
Only beast.

I do not see angels,
Only devils.

I do not see protection,
Only dangers.

I do not see people,
Only dead bodies.

I do not see buildings,
Only destruction.

I do not see the books,
Only guns.

I do not see security,
Only war.

I do not see the light,
Only darkness.

I do not see the future,
Only end.

© 2016 Meshalini


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its quite interesting akka...thats what we see

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

haha...thank you...
Great thoughts. I appreciate

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much...
I do understand this poem.
"I do not see the future,
Only end."
The above lines. I wonder what did this generation leave for the children? Me and you must be the fusion to open eyes and teach concern, kindness and love. A single foot into the lake. Can create a movement that can turn to a hurricane of hope. Thank you Meshalini for sharing the powerful poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Yes..I too agree with you..
Thank you Coyote...
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome Meshalini.
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mou
you have portrayed the darkness that has captured the mind of a person who lives in those countries..
it is vibrant and straight forward about its intention and message toward the reader..
nice work-done....!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much, mou
The truth is being highlighted amazingly! Wonderful job done here....
Keep writing😊

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much....
The poem is so very touching ! It forces you to think about what must be happening to the people who live in such countries.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Meshalini

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much friend....

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Added on August 6, 2016
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