India VS Pakistan

India VS Pakistan

A Poem by Meshalini
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A long conflict that still happening between India and Pakistan.

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One country split into two.
Pakistan became India's neighbor.
People had no choice and stepped in their new soil,
But fate changed after it.

Problems popped up in the borders.
Army started bombing to each others.
Kashmir became the center point of fight,
Where thousands losing their lives.

The countries' leaders were scrambling for parliament seats and posing for pictures,
When devils in human look tears the bodies of innocents.
Peace between this countries had already gone,
Until now, it have never been found.

Social media is filling up with prayers.
Soon it will become viral.
But who's going to stop this nonsense?
Find the answer by yourself.

© 2017 Meshalini


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Meshalini
Just my worries and pain.

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we the common people are the victim of it..truly nonsense but making a great sense while capturing their own interest..probably those questions will never find an answer..pathetic..but a very smart write..that style of yours which I like the most..again very nice work done

Posted 6 Years Ago


Meshalini

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Really nice poem...In this fight between two countries , the one who is suffering is common man across border...You know this political leaders can just give statements and taunt on each other but can they bring back those innocent lives who were the victim of this hatredness ???
I loved your poem and its theme..
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing..
With love ,
Riddhi

Posted 6 Years Ago


Meshalini

6 Years Ago

Yes..so true.....
Thank you riddhi for the comments...
It seems not the land but the people and peace of both the countries are partitioned leaving behind a day to day tragedy whr each of the soldier doing their work .Praying for the endingof this long fight .Moreover I loved your poem that echoed your pain as an individual.keep it up ☺☺☺

Posted 6 Years Ago


Meshalini

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
well portrayed! The norms are well conveyed.
While india and Pak parted at the time of independence, Kahmir was left confused whether it should mingle with pak or ind or remain autonomous.
Excellent!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Meshalini

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your time..
Two nations been fighting for awhile. Both good people, hard workers and educated. I wish I had the answer. I pray for common sense. We don't want war. Many will die. Thank you for sharing the powerful words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Meshalini

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much coyote...
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
That's a big issue..problems between these 2 countries..
But we people always treat nice to each other..but still these problems needs to get solve..nice topic good job

Posted 6 Years Ago


Meshalini

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much...
Frustration is voiced in this poem, and I am in love with It. I can relate/understand It more, being an Indian, and having family who were forced to uproot from Pakistan to India during the partition. Great job.
Thanks for posting,
Mira.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Meshalini

6 Years Ago

I can understand your feelings...for now we just need to be positive and hope for the best. Thank yo.. read more

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Added on May 18, 2017
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