Feeling loved

Feeling loved

A Poem by Mia
"

Love is not heard...it's felt

"

Tell me that you love me

Why? You already know

I want to hear you say it

So it can bring you comfort?

Or something of the sort


 

Tell me that you love me

No, you already know

I need to hear you say it

It won’t make you feel it any more

You have no way of knowing


 

I won’t tell you that I love you

You must already know

It not something you hear

Or even understand


 

I tell you that I love you

In everything I do.

It’s not something that I say to you

No words could get across


 

You see it in my actions

The way I look at you

I won’t tell you that I love you

You can’t feel it through my words.

 

© 2012 Mia


Author's Note

Mia
Good memories :)

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I love this! There's a real magic about your words.. a happiness of phrases .. not a misery in sight .. and okay, you need hear those magic words, but pretty sure you know they're there. Maybe, just maybe if he's read your wonderful poem and seen the picture .. (which sadly i can't see) he'll keep telling you those magic words over and over and over until youre sick of them!

Clever form used here, like the format, good use of italics .. thought i'd better say something about the actual writing not merely its emotions!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Mia

8 Years Ago

Emma :) you’re a real sweetheart, thank you ever so much! He always wants me to say my writing to .. read more



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i sometimes get into this mood

i believe love is in everything we do
and so little in what we say

if it needs to be said
then there is something wrong with the relationship
i agree with you 100 percent

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wonderful sentiments. I just am wondering why you changed the fonts in the last 3 stanzas?

Sorry I have not been more attentive these days, but I am quite involved with a few other things than my writing right now....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thank you for sharing your good memories... oh yes... That sweet feeling of love can move us over the miles and the years... Nothing more beautiful than that!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mia

8 Years Ago

No...thank you for reading :) I'm glad you did and thank you for the lovely review!
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DrD
Mia, I don't know how I missed this work earlier but I found it intriguing in its concept and approach to a relationship so typical. I think everyone has heard those words and felt your response. But you return it to us with a unique style and formidable skill. I enjoyed this immensely.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mia

8 Years Ago

Thank you Doc, I'm glad you enjoyed this. It's always a pleasure to have you by (so to speak).
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Sid
Wow, I love this, specially the last two stanzas, there is truth and great wisdom in those words, smart man I must say. Words can be redundant in the face of actions and I agree with him...great work Mia!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mia

8 Years Ago

LOL! He'll be glad here that :) thank you so much for stopping by!
Sid

8 Years Ago

Haha good to know :)
Mia

8 Years Ago

:)
While I personally enjoy being told I'm loved and it means something to me, I think it's incredible that HE realizes it is shown and confirmed through actions. Smart man. Wonderful little piece. Smooth and romantic. Nice Mia!

Posted 8 Years Ago


That_Girl

8 Years Ago

You're welcome. :) Adorable photos by the way.
Mia

8 Years Ago

you're a keeper, I can tell :D
That_Girl

8 Years Ago

Hahaha thanks! I feel so special! :') lol
Oh Mia, This is a mixed bag to me. personally I believe in expression through words and actions. Neither alone! If someone has to ask then the message is NOT clear. actions do speak louder than words however words speak and words add colour to the expression of love and desire. Else we should all be deaf!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mia

8 Years Ago

After reading lots of these reviews, I can see that I didn't get my point across...it was romantic a.. read more
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I agree with your words.
"I tell you that I love you
In everything I do."
Love is what we do for our number two. Words are important. Actions are very important. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mia

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I think the words are only important if they are backed up by the the actions.
I suppose I'm just a woman but I do like to be told the 3 words knowing that actions speak louder ..Made me rethink the man's point of view though and a lovely write as always..tender and heartfelt

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mia

8 Years Ago

Thank you :D
It's nice to hear once in awhile...I agree! I want both...lol
Beautiful and sweet

Posted 8 Years Ago


Mia

8 Years Ago

Thank you!

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