Tell me why

Idea from a friend. Not really a poem just an idea

Tell me why you love me

Exactly whats your reason?

Love is never easy

Life is always hard

Me and you forever

Exactly what does that mean?

Why do you care for me

How are you this nice

You and me forever.

Tell me why you love me. Do you really know....me?

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

very nicely done...good questions to ask
like the title Tell me why
thank you for sharing

[Ethale Captor]

An excellent write for your first piece. I look forward to your next works.

[Miaka Samarason]

Thank you for the review

[Ethale Captor]

No problem.

[LostandAlone]

I really enjoyed this poem. I find these questions going through my mind when I think about my boyfriend, Michael. I think all woman eventually find themselves asking theirselves these questions. Wonderful poem, Darling.

[Miaka Samarason]

Thank you so much for the review I'm glad you liked it!

[LostandAlone]

You're welcome, Darling! :)

[Ashley G.]

Welcome to Writerscafe! This doesn't rhyme but it could still be a poem. I look forward to your next update!

[Miaka Samarason]

Thanks for the review! I know it sucks....

[Ashley G.]

It doesn't suck. It's just a free- no, one of those poems that don't rhyme. I don't remember what their called...

[Miaka Samarason]

true... i just suck at rhyming and it actually makes scens... so that's the best I can do without it sounding like crud....