The Secret Door Within

The Secret Door Within

A Poem by MagicMoments
















I've looked everywhere to see your face,
To feel the glow of your grace.
I've searched all the countries far and wide,
Delved everywhere looking from each side.
I've mingled with the Church congregation
Of this and every other nation.

But still my soul it felt alone,
Until I found by chance your home.
I looked within and there I saw
The open entrance to your door.

For I am you and you are me.
Not only the blind cannot see.

© 2011 MagicMoments


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Beautiful write. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Blew me away! Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is lovely! The rhyme scheme is quite nice, hard to pull off but you did it well. Great job!

The last two lines were my favorite. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 3, 2011
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MagicMoments
MagicMoments

South-west, United Kingdom



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