Words

Words

A Poem by Michael
"

nothing important

"
I discover the joy of writing.
Stories begin to pour out.
I have so much to say.
My vocabulary is small.

No one wants to read and, or the.
It, that, the other thing.
Their minds needs fed.
Their interest fades.

I put seasoning on it.
Catchup and hot-sauce.
Ate it page by page.
From A to Z.

Have so much to say.
My vocabulary is small.
Dictionary tasted good.
Still their mind fades.

And they leave.

© 2011 Michael


Author's Note

Michael
Thanks for reading

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oooh - iLove this! It's so relevant to writers...and the journey with their audience. "still their mind fades" - powerful...really shows how, no matter how much we work and toil over our craft, we still can't control the minds, will, and interest of others. A stinging good work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Everything is important, no matter how big or small
a vocabulary is. it's all how you feel it and this one
feels good...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Joseph

Thanks :)

Sephiroth
thanks, a lot for the review,
I try to think that way too, its does get discouraging knowing I do not know many "good words" and their meaning.


Posted 13 Years Ago


Interesting. I can relate! LOL

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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