Stars Fall

Stars Fall

A Poem by Michael Lopez
"

is it finished yet...

"

When the stars fall,..

my love cries out...

 

take me away...

a mid-night triste,

with the pages turning.

 

Into the night,

where out hearts collide...

and the story crosses,

Our lives decide where we coincide.

Just hoping you keep me in your mind....

 

 

© 2010 Michael Lopez


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WOW!! nice poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really love the second stanza in this, it's short but powerful and the unique use of language is captivating. Kind of reminded me of getting lost in a book, like it takes you into a new world. :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the ending, so relatable. That last line. Great. Amazing. I really like this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple thoughts but poetically put which gives it intense meaning. I do want to offer something on this one... The title is lovely and you bind it in well at the start but I reckon more great phrases and imagery with the stars and context in line would really add to this.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Michael Lopez
Michael Lopez

Houston, TX



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