A Love Poem

A Love Poem

A Poem by Michael Thrower

Such a mysterious force, love.


Just one glace was all I had;

Thoughts of you were truly bad.

Beauty all around; that glow;

Smile that could win a show.


Visage like a painter’s mind;

Hair like music and a rhyme.

Shining like the sun above;

Voice that sings a song of love.


Steps of grace and harmony;

Perfume like the autumn trees.

Eyes of fire and the sea;

All in all you have won me. 

© 2014 Michael Thrower

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This is just beautiful awseome write love it! Keep writing

Posted 7 Years Ago

This was lovely, and playful, and visual, and sound. I very much liked the line- "Visage like a painter’s mind;", visage is a kick a*s word and was perfect in this description.
It's been far to long since I've read your work!

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love is a funny thing, you never know who, how, when, where, why, or what.. it comes in all shapes, forms, sizes, and afflicts in different ways.. this is quite the tale of being bitten... well done... it is sweet and full of majestic imagery.. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

I absolutely love this. The emotions overflow. Very well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Love the mystery you have pondered here Michael, that second stanza is stellar.

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michael Thrower

8 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda.
Sight, smell, hearing, feeling.. This poem touches all the senses..

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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7 Reviews
Added on August 21, 2014
Last Updated on August 21, 2014
Tags: dream, dreaming, sleep, nocturnal, poetry, tolkien, parallel, stars, moon, dark, night, sun, clouds, day, peace, funny, irish, poem, pipe, woman, lady, skirt, travel, realm, star, galaxy, space, earth


Michael Thrower
Michael Thrower

Azeroth, GA

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