A Love Poem

Such a mysterious force, love.

Just one glace was all I had;

Thoughts of you were truly bad.

Beauty all around; that glow;

Smile that could win a show.

 

Visage like a painter’s mind;

Hair like music and a rhyme.

Shining like the sun above;

Voice that sings a song of love.

 

Steps of grace and harmony;

Perfume like the autumn trees.

Eyes of fire and the sea;

All in all you have won me. 

Reviews

[passionberry]

This is just beautiful awseome write love it! Keep writing

[Lost in Wonderland]

This was lovely, and playful, and visual, and sound. I very much liked the line- "Visage like a painter’s mind;", visage is a kick a*s word and was perfect in this description.
It's been far to long since I've read your work!

[AprilRN1210]

Love is a funny thing, you never know who, how, when, where, why, or what.. it comes in all shapes, forms, sizes, and afflicts in different ways.. this is quite the tale of being bitten... well done... it is sweet and full of majestic imagery.. :)

[Shadows Ember]

I absolutely love this. The emotions overflow. Very well written.

[Frieda P]

Love the mystery you have pondered here Michael, that second stanza is stellar.

[Michael Thrower]

Thank you Frieda.

[Rana]

Sight, smell, hearing, feeling.. This poem touches all the senses..