Sylis

Sylis

A Book by MichelleClay
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Fantasy / Romance If you have lost nearly everything and you find yourself in situations where nothing is quite as it seems... ...maybe it isn't

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© 2013 MichelleClay


Author's Note

MichelleClay
This is a DRAFT version of ‘Sylis’. I am aware that there may be a lot of technical error’s but at this stage I’m trying to get feedback on the story line, character’s etc. Any technical advice will be gratefully received and I will look to edit the whole story with everyone’s suggestions in mind.
Thanks for reading
Michelle :)

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I enjoyed reading your draft. I would love it if you join us at; http://poeticvoice.ning.com/

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Posted 13 Years Ago


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I was hoping to read it again. I loved this book. Were you going to post more of it?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Enjoying your book and hoping to send the full report of just how much very soon! Happy weekend, O Gifted One!!! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I see by how many friends have put your book into Libraries (me included) that the many already appreciate that you are a writer Michelle (you may want to change your profile entry lol) Also... sites are vying for your contributions. Well I must add that 440 views is a really positive indication for you, I'll pop in and out as I have the time and read your story and if I have comments as a novelist, I will send them to your mail... Well, Right On / Write On... Romon in Review. (me Ro)
RCJ Frankson
Creative Standard Productions.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A Story to Tell = A Writer.. ??? ...

Posted 12 Years Ago


I enjoyed reading your draft. I would love it if you join us at; http://poeticvoice.ning.com/

We are an online writing community that provides writers with the feedback, motivation, and advice needed to achieve their writing goals.The Poetic Voice Community is fast and easy to join, and you will not get lost in it's easy maneuvering features. We here at Poetic Voice also hope to grow as a community of friends. Our intention, and wish is to learn and share with others. Basically we believe an open mind, and heart can promote growth. We hope to gain an understanding that can stretch and reach around the world.


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great story! I liked the first person aspect of it. It drew me in right away and I felt every emotion the narrator felt.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 10, 2011
Last Updated on April 26, 2013

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MichelleClay

Bedfordshire, United Kingdom



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