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A walk

A walk

A Poem by MichelleClay

Sunlight sparkles colours off the dew drops 
The air is fresh and clean
Leaves are green and vibrant
There's not a soul to be seen
Each step i take is springy
Each turn a new surprise
How I often wonder
How people miss this with their eyes
Time escapes this place 
A piece of heaven just for me
I can roam theses woods for hours
Only here am I truly  free 

© 2012 MichelleClay


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You've captured a time when you were appreciative of nature and all its details. There is a spiritual side to it and you caught it through the use of words that brought the feeling for us all to share, if only for a short time. Wonderful poetry Michelle.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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What a freedom with your senses overflowing with beauty, and yes, one that too many miss in the rush of life... Each morning and night I walk to a river down from my house, and I feel that wonder awaken from your words... Thank you for letting me glimpse that moment anytime... May you find this piece of heaven every day, dear poet.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I understand this poem. Good to wander into the forest. Allowed us to think and escape the city and real life. Good description create good visions of a long and peaceful walk. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


just simply beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


P. Kapper

8 Years Ago

My sentiments exactly
Reminds me of running through the woods, one of my favourite things. Thanks for this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


MichelleClay

8 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by x
OOoo I know the feeling :) I really love it so much :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


MichelleClay

8 Years Ago

Glad you can relate :)
Very beautiful and light feeling. To explore nature, take in all that she has to offer, experince her magnificent art...no better way to spend a day. very nicely done. This poem has a very easy feel to it, refreshing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


MichelleClay

8 Years Ago

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it :)
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Joe
Whow It Is Beautiful :)

Fav Lines:

"I can roam theses woods for hours
Only here am I truly free" / Hmmmmm Lovely Lines! I Love It! :)

So Lovely Michelle!
Enjoyed!

Posted 8 Years Ago


MichelleClay

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the sweet review x

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MichelleClay
MichelleClay

Bedfordshire, United Kingdom



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