.... freedom

.... freedom

A Poem by Michelle Lauren


... with freedom comes sin
... with sin comes guilt
... with guilt comes death
... with death comes freedom

© 2020 Michelle Lauren


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The Circle of life. I understand this as 'dont be afraid to achieve what you want no matter the scary path it takes.'

Posted 3 Years Ago


I love this. So many times people are afraid to go down a certain somewhat scary path becuz death might be involved. But sometimes we have to pick a path that walks us thru death, which gets us to real business of freedom. Your poem is a hundred times more multi-layered than it looks (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Years Ago


An "interesting" circular view...

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Michelle Lauren
Michelle Lauren

North of Boston , MA



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I am a self-sustaining woman that has lived life mainly from watching and observing others in my highly dysfunctional family as NOT what to do. My outlook on life and the world we inhabit is dismal at.. more..

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