Won't someone save my soul

This is a completely non-fiction song thats about a person who was very important in my life but was probably one of the worst mistakes I made.

That song came on the radio

I ran out, said I have to go

Reminded me of well you know

Us...and all we could have been

 

You broke my heart just like everyday

Its nothing new, this game you played

And I always seemed to let you win

Why oh why did I ever let you in

 

**Chorus

Into my heart

Into to my my mind

Creeping into my thoughts

And my desires

You're arms are so warm

But your heart is so cold

Oh someone please save my soul **

 

I ran arcoss the room and broke down crying

I was love sick, there was no denying

How much I wanted to hold you

Or how much I wished you loved me too

 

My friends went on like nothing was wrong

Like they couldn't hear me singing this song

My hurt was runining me

Why did have to let you in

 

**Chorus

Into my heart

Into to my my mind

Creeping into my thoughts

And my desires

You're arms are so warm

But your heart is so cold

Oh someone please save my soul

 

Why couldn't you ever love me

We were perfect for each other

We'd be so happy

But I guess you were never told

Oh someone please won't you save my soul**

 

Should've shut you out

Should've closed that doors

2 years was plenty of time

Why did I give you more

You keep pulling me back

Just watch me fall

With an fake, glass grin

Why did I let you in?

 

**Chorus

Into my heart

Into to my my mind

Creeping into my thoughts

And my desires

You're arms are so warm

But your heart is so cold

Oh someone please save my soul

 

Why couldn't you ever love me

We were perfect for each other

We'd be so happy

But I guess you were never told

Oh someone please won't you save my soul

 

Oh oh, save my soul

I never want to let go

So someone please save my soul...

 

Author's Note

This is a completely non-fiction song thats about a person who was very important in my life but was probably one of the worst mistakes I made. God's been good enough to let me use the pain and He has the glory.
God Bless
~Mickey

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

It would make a good song for the radio indeed, perhaps try making a video of it on youtube? ;P Hehe, only kidding. Well done.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Hehe thanks! And i would...if only i could write music...:P
God Bless

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

This is the type of song I wanna listen to :D
Remarkable work!
100/100

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks roxast :D
God Bless

[Isa Ruffatti]

Sounds like a Taylor Swift-like song. Awesome work Lost in Wonderland! (NOTE THAT THIS IS NOT SARCASM)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Haha thank you Isabella! I suppose I wrote it with a bit of an intention to have a little country:)
God Bless

[Isa Ruffatti]

You're welcome :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

:)

[SmileBig :)]

Ok, this is SO good. Im a song writer, as you know, and i am so extremely jealous of this. Its sooo good as a song. i sung it in my head, and though it probs sounds so different to you then it does to me, it was still wonderful. Well, great flow, great word choice, great chorus, and great job. You never dissapoint me :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you so much missy!! and you have nothing to be jealous about!
God Bless:)

[SmileBig :)]

haha no problem :) and thanks!

[Irvette Dauphine]

like this song.. this is great :D

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks Irvette:D
God Bless

[.]

It's a great love song! I have never written one like this. 100/100

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you so much Katerina! :D
God Bless

[.]

No problem :)