Peace?

Peace?

A Poem by Lost in Wonderland

Peace...?

Oh what a nice dream

To not have this awful, suffocating

Compress on your heart

And hurricane in your mind

To be able to smile freely

Ha! I that even possible

I honestly don't know anymore

 

For a moment I believed it was

And then came the weight of the past

Crashing like a tidal wave on the

Shores of my conflicted soul

 

Why can't I learn?

"Forgive and forget" obviously doesn't apply here

And so I'll put on my plastered grin

(Until one day, when I finally win)

And keep everyone around me

In an ignorant state of bliss

© 2012 Lost in Wonderland


Author's Note

Lost in Wonderland
Poem I wrote whilst being bored and anti-social in health. How very fun right? :D Anyways I feel this way sometimes, bt not always. God's getting me to the promise of peace:) He has the glory <3
God Bless

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Indeed, peace is an impossible goal to achieve and I could not have said it better myself.

Posted 11 Years Ago


you have some delightful imagery in this piece... I really enjoyed reading it. One small typo however :) ..

Ha! I that even possible
Should be - Ha! Is that even possible

I liked this poem, we are always looking for inner peace :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

thank you:) And i'll be sure to fix that!
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Pax
inner peace is a quest like life is!
so dont give up.
great!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

Indeed, and I won't! God's just starting to answer my orayer for it this year! Thanks for the review.. read more
Pax

11 Years Ago

patience is the key! and your welcome
Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

so true:) Its easier now to see that in hindsight haha
God bless us all, and someday it may truly be such a thing as peace.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

here's hoping~
great write ...i love it ...well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

Thank you Afra
I'm glad you don't feel that way now. : )

Posted 11 Years Ago


Peaceworker22

11 Years Ago

That is true, and as long as I work with God on this, it will be impossible to not come true. : )
Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

exactly
Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

:)

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Added on August 28, 2012
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Tags: Peace, Poetry, Dream, Confliction, Suffocation, Fake Smile, Ignorance

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