Dancing in the Sand

Dancing in the Sand

A Poem by Lost in Wonderland
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A romantic fantasy...oh if only <3

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Do you think we could run away?

Escape the impossibility of our love

Forget all complications

Throw caution to the wind

And just...go with it?

 

Won't you please swoop into my reality

And take me away to a lovely dream

Where I can feel the warm caress of your hand

As we dance barefoot in the sand

And get butterflies

A bubbly feeling that's aroused inside

When your gentle lips meet mine

And when I get lost in your deep, brown eyes

 

Free falling in a spiral of ardor

Laughing, smiling, playing

Acting like children and true loves

All at once

Apart from our past sins

And in a place of pure bliss

Filled with soft embraces

And topped with a sweet kiss

© 2012 Lost in Wonderland


Author's Note

Lost in Wonderland
Written on a whim, as most of my poems and stories are:) God has the glory and may He bless you
Love always
~Lost in Wonderland

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Reminds me of We Could Run Away by Needtobreathe

VERY nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

thank you steven:)
Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

np
Wow...Amazing..and beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

Thank you raya:)
God bless
 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

You're welcome. (:
Beautiful. I don't know what else to say.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

Thank you:)
God bless
This is so beautiful. I enjoyed your fantasy write and the words flow perfectly together. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much friend:)
really sweet and lushly penned. great write :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)
God bless
Wonderful fantasy... expressed beautifully. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

Thank you:)
God bless
Really enjoyed this one one. The imagery was great, and it flowed well with the emotion of the poem. It is definitely an alluring feeling, bliss. Looking forward to more of your writing!

-Z

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much:)
God bless
It's really sweet :) nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

Thank you:)
God bless

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Added on October 2, 2012
Last Updated on November 3, 2012
Tags: Love, Romance, Ardor, Smiling, Laughing, Playing, Passion, Bliss, Dream, Fantsay, Impossible, Poem, Poetry, Beach

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Lost in Wonderland

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