life

The depth of my madness knows no bounds

And I embrace it with every jerked, contorted step

On this pathway through purgatory

we call

life.

Author's Note

not really sure what this is, I may come back and add more to it, but at the moment I can think of no more to add.
God bless, He has the glory <3
~Mikcey

Reviews

[Neon]

When i read it first i really didn't understand what actually is it... then i read your author's note and that shouldn've have seemed helpful so, I decided reading this one again and i got the peace in the write. Yeah .. it's a nice but I really don't think this short piece needs some editions because you've told about life into your words .. and the words're jointly linked with your own life. So, I'd say .. leave it be as same as it is .. I liked this one. Keep on!

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you:)

[Heather Hassell]

This is definitely very powerful as is. I love how you compare purgatory to life, it's very clever and it makes you think quite a bit.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless

[smilempsn]

Short and deep...
I would suggest to keep it as it is :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks:)))
God bless

[smilempsn]

Godji Bless you too :)