l'eau de lac

A sonnet

Soft summer sunshine
Shone on my skin,
Not a sound or tiny din
What a wonderful time to go,
To  dander to the shore
As we did so many the times before
Across the wily field
And up the hill and down again,
No reason to yield a frown
To the water we went down
And many hours were spent,
The Lough water lapping
Between our fingers and our toes
Watching the eau as it flows.

Reviews

[The Water Queen]

This was a very pleasent read and it was so easy to read. I love the flow and how it just continues to the end. It kept my attention and i wished this poem did not have to end. I love the softness of the piece and the peace that it brings. Great poem

[Jessica]

Very pleasant. I like it's soft nature. Great job :)

[James Watts]

Nice write.

[zombiikillah666]

awh. i really love this. (:
beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is beautiful. The shore of the beautiful ocean is where I can feel peace also. I like the feel and location of the beautiful poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[EMW]

I love laying in sunlight. Soft summer sunshine shone on my skin. That is my favorite

[Romeion Case]

I was there. :-) lovely piece. keep it up.

[aaron]

i love it

[Dom Macchiaroli]

This is a terrific piece. Is this line intentional?

"As we did so many (the) times before"

I am just asking because I like the line either way. Good job.

[zappy]

great poem this is very awesome