Gone and still thinking of you...

When you love somone so much. It's almost impossible to fall completely out of love with them. Because you know they'll always have your heart.

 

  

 

 My mind is swirling with thoughts of you.

  Wondering, hoping- if you'll ever come through.

    We used to be there for eachother.

     Through day in and day out.

  But, for some reason you have gone missing.

     No longer there for me to see.

 

    I do not know why you have gone away.

Were you unhappy with me or just sad in this world.

  I guess I may never know.

 

  I just wish I knew if you love me, like I love you.

Author's Note

Written for my "special somone" =]
Who I wish I got to tell him that I loved him before he went away.

Reviews

[Lady Lazarus.]

This had me smitten.
a fantastic poem & very heart felt.
its made me decide to take the initiative in my life before I move.

[Jeberle]

Very well done. This poem has great potential. Your use of emotion is great; the reader really feels what you feel, but I think you could expand this more. If you throw in some images, to show us how much you love him, instead of just telling us, I think this poem could be even more powerful.

Well written. Keep up the good work!

[Kayleigh]

Thank you! =]
Well, I was going to tell him on the last day of school. But, I didn't see him so I didn't get to tell him goodbye or that I loved him. I'm hoping I see him some time over the summer. :)

[Gema]

Aww you should tell this guy/girl! Let them no lifes to short 4 ppl to fade and slip through your hands! Still tell him u never know things may change!! well written x