Feel good

Feel good

A Poem by SugarlessGiRL
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When you set a goal and you complete it, you're told you'll feel good, but you never do, you only feel good when you do as you please... so this what I write when I don't feel good....

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To move when told

Determinate

Define where you walk and go

If you're limitless

Then sprint across the water

Empty steps and you don’t falter

Have pride in yourself

Don't look for what everyone else see's

Take your mind and perceive

Because satisfaction is unsatisfactory

Completion is endless

From here to nowhere and back again

You can’t find what you’re looking for

Especially because you don’t know what it is

You're just told it's somewhere, possibly nowhere

So as life goes on you learn this

You’re not happy

You’re a liar

You’re not yourself

You’re someone else

It’s called being useless

To have nothing, to want something

Be told to set a goal and do it

Don’t be so envious of yourself

Be jealous of something else

Make the items and emotions of the world worth it

To try for it

Finish to make it

Then when completion has finished

You're goal is over with

When you did it, did you think it’d feel good?

Because it never does

You're mind is endless

You're soul is irrelevant

Clear your head

Drink down quickly

Eat it slowly

Replenishment for your mentality's gutter

Get something in there, you’re full of air

You gotta get out of here

You can’t stay in one place too long

Because if you do you’d get too comfortable

Can't lose sight of what's right and wrong

You can’t let your guard down

Because you're not very good at living

Imagine how'd you'd be if you were dead

Imagine not having a back; should nothing follow in your steps

A spineless b*****d

There’s nothing behind you because you’re everywhere

If you can see everything

You get the entity

So then you’re whole

So you’ll survive

Rip the bones out of your body

Even if you’re dead, or somehow awake and alive

Just sink to the floor

Fall beyond the knee’s of the lookers

Be the beholder

Stride to do it

Hand in hand

Your love is your life

Your life is free

You get what I mean

So you do what you have to do

Just bite down and keep at it

Until you feel good…

© 2011 SugarlessGiRL


Author's Note

SugarlessGiRL
Ignore bad grammar because I know it's in there somewhere~ haha~ review please, I return reviews~

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love the juxtapositions of meaning merging into one. Love the meaning and the conveying thereof.

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SugarlessGiRL
SugarlessGiRL

Nirai Kanai, I come from happiness, FL



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Well... for starters I'm Japanese obssessed, Anime and Manga obssessed, Gyaru obssessed, and Vocaloid obssessed. Rin and Len Kagamine to be exact! I can say that just about anything I ever write is no.. more..

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