Our last chance

Our last chance

A Poem by Behind the Backdrop Siloquette
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It's a poem about the relationship that has just past between me and my boyfriend of almost 6 months, it expresses my feelings throughout the time, and now how i feel. idkk.. enjoy? (:

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Our last Chance
 by: Mikayla Lykins

How do you think we were supposed to keep,
Living in those memories after all we couldn't keep,
Living in the past, even though it was set in stone,
I feel as if I'm outside of a broken home.

We started out like the morning dew,
Fresh and excited as if the moonlight's touch would never shrew,
But it grew and we fought,
now all that i have left is the organ called a "broken heart",

I know it was me that ended all of it,
and also that it's weird that I'm the only one to regret,
but i think it was all for the best,
Even if i was the one that ended up with less,

Just know i love you,
Even if its through,
cause the feelings i always had,
 were genuine and true,

I think i took everything out of proportion,
Even if you apologized and cried your heart open,
but just try to move on, and find someone new,
And know in your heart, i'm always hoping for the best for you.

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October 14, 2009 - March 4, 2010.




© 2010 Behind the Backdrop Siloquette


Author's Note

Behind the Backdrop Siloquette
Um, idk, depressing but enjoy.

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now it's ur turn to make me cry? i see how it is! beautiful Mikayla. beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


nice, this is very strong.
a powerful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


i really liked it!!! had great emotion and rhyming, i agree with frantzo it does put us in your shoes, didn't know you could write this good^^ great job:)
-Mary

Posted 11 Years Ago


Yeah the fact that it's depressing add a lot more to the poem. you expressed your feelings very well, and you put the reader in your shoes, I could feel the pain.
Great poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is really true. There's always a time when you love someone so much, but it's for the best to let them go.
I liked the line: "Now all that I have left is the organ called the "broken heart", " Just don't forget to capitalize your "I"s and its should be it's. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Hi, I'm Mikayla. People sometimes call me Mickey Mouse cause of my funny attitude. I'm 13 and I love writing. I have many good friends that are gifted in writing, though i am not. I'm an Artist. Peopl.. more..


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