The darkness

What it does to you

It sneaks in so quietly no one knows

I gets inside you, controls you

It's the most unspeakable things

You never see it, You don't even know it

It could be anything and anyone

The darkness it lives ther

I works there, it takes you there

It needs you, it takes you there

You can't escape it, you don't even know it

It speaks to you, Tells you to do things

Unspeakible things

Not to others only to you

It cuts you

It scares you

It consumes you

It grabs you, it gets you

No one can stop it not even you

There is only one say

And it's not yours

It's never yours

Reviews

[GTVile]

You know, this is very much like my song Abyss, except yours is a little more specific, and I think you capture it a bit better. That ineffable darkness; the antithesis of the light we perpetually bathe in and yearn for, has an equally mighty opposite that tries to consume us as well. Some live a bit closer to it than others, but its intent is always the same. To consume us. Great job.

[Tyler and Lozza]

wow, i love it!!!!!!!!! ♥ - lozza xx

[Silence]

Spooky, but I understand the message. Actually, it might just be the message I personally got from it, but what I'm seeing is that certain bad things are completely out of our control.

[Millie]

GTVile- i will have to read your song Abyss :).xx

[Adam :P]

wow really good, darkness really can do all those things to you.
i like it!