Shut up! And listen

read it and you'll know what i'm on about

 

 

 

Every time I go to speak

You stand in front and shout over the top

It's like you don't understand

I'm here, I want to be listened to

But you can't shut up and listen

Not even for one second

I feel like i should give up

Stop trying to fight in a worthless battle

You always come back for more

It's almost like you want the thrill of the fight

Without the outcome

But guess what babe

I don't work like that

If you think i do, there's something wrong

You obviously don't know me

Because you won't shut up and listen

I love the fight to, the adrenaline rush

Sometimes i have to put what i need first

Babe it's you

I need you but you won't

You won't shut up and listen

Author's Note

yes it's long yes i was fustrated, but it got how i'm feeling across please review tell me if you like i can take critisim :).xxxx

Reviews

[Loner]

* Smiles * that was a real emotional punch u gave the readers i must say
and u have beautifully portrayed those people who do not know how to SHUT UP AND LISTEN ...... good job done .

[Tyler and Lozza]

Milie this is AMAZING :D love it soooooooooooooooooooooooo soooooooooooooooooooo much baby gurl ♥♥♥♥ - Lozza x

[Millie]

Thank you silence and it's the second one still are... thanks you none the less :).xxx

[Silence]

It's good that you managed to get your frustration out by making this. I get a very solid feeling of what you were (or maybe still are) thinking. Never hold anything in, cause it builds and makes it worse, so keep up the good work!