That boy from across the feild

That boy from across the feild

A Poem by Millie
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Summer romance type thing, but with a twist in its tail. The girl's love, the boy's other.

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The warmth of the embrace as you held me in your arms

Sweet, Soft, touch as you hold on tight

The smell of your colone as i breath in deep

Eyes close as if lulling to sleep

Reality seems so far away, as here i could stay

 

Joyful smile, Sunlit face

The sight that catches my eye when i see you

That boy from across the feild

Eyes lock, waiting for the other to make the first move

Second step is always the hardst

 

Breath escapes me

Love elates me

Feelings over power

 

She's always there

Dewelling over me

A constant reminder

of my wrog doing 

 

I don't belong

This is not my place

 I am not your's to keep

There's another in your life but no one in mine

I'd give anything, everything

For that to be false, for this to be a terrifing dream

 

Strolling closer

That big smile on your face, the cautious one on mine

My body begins to tingle

As your arms rap round me, warming me, needing me

Our soft embrace

Not for the last time

 

My heart pounds

My soul feels guilty

Head spins like around-a-bout

Knowing what is wrong and what is right

My guilt pleasure, Your one on the side  

 

The last embrace is soon to be

© 2011 Millie


Author's Note

Millie
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Any chance of creating a story out of this ??
Its so emotional - I had no idea your poems were this awsome

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MotyJr: It shows how much we speak now a days at school haha
It is made up :).xXx

Posted 13 Years Ago


a bit too emotional for somthing made up dont ya think??? come on whos the poem about?

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow this is good, keep going. you are on the right road.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 7, 2011
Last Updated on April 12, 2011
Tags: Summer, Romance, Love, Lust, Teenage
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Millie
Millie

Portsmouth, Copner, United Kingdom



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I'm 16 (almost). I write to express conflicting emotions. This enable to let me release them without feeling like there mine by putting them in different scenarios. I enjoy writing, but music is m.. more..

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