Finally, a contest entry that actually followed the given criteria. Take a look at some of the other entries! They have absolutely NOTHING to do with the contest. SpokenWord won't be happy when she reads them only to find out that nobody read her details on the contest.
As for the poem, I absolutely love the effect of:
"Want me, Need me
Taste me, Love me
Hate me. Break me
Want me, Need me
Taste me, Love me
Hate me. Break me"
Genius! Making it feel like were going in circles on a ride, faster and faster then-- "STOP!" It reminds me of old horror movies where the carnival rides are going by themselves.... I just love it! Great job! For great writing and for following directions.
Kiri
Finally, a contest entry that actually followed the given criteria. Take a look at some of the other entries! They have absolutely NOTHING to do with the contest. SpokenWord won't be happy when she reads them only to find out that nobody read her details on the contest.
As for the poem, I absolutely love the effect of:
"Want me, Need me
Taste me, Love me
Hate me. Break me
Want me, Need me
Taste me, Love me
Hate me. Break me"
Genius! Making it feel like were going in circles on a ride, faster and faster then-- "STOP!" It reminds me of old horror movies where the carnival rides are going by themselves.... I just love it! Great job! For great writing and for following directions.
Kiri
I'm 16 (almost).
I write to express conflicting emotions. This enable to let me release them without feeling like there mine by putting them in different scenarios.
I enjoy writing, but music is m.. more..