The Beginning

The Beginning

A Poem by Mimozi

The first chord

The first line

The first look

The first rhyme

 

Those rare moments of sheer bliss

When life forms perfect piece by piece

When doors fly open, let in the breeze

When walls do crumble and bring release

 

When hope is mere hope no more

When you are found by what you are looking for

When there is so much to explore

When you forgive what's come before

 

That tiny atom of breath divine

New universes spawn within that line

Bold hunger races up your spine

When you embark, within the light resign

 

Creation's yours, you know that you are winning

When you have found your way to the beginning

 

© 2008 Mimozi


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I loved that, so full of hope.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh, I loved it! Brilliant!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Magnificent!

Your words fill my heart and inspire my soul. Reading your words is a blessing. Thank you for sharing such a profound poem. I celebrate its beauty and form. I will treasure each word. Well done!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Life is often the path to the real beginning, at which time life really starts. Love the rhyme scheme...

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very nice write, very good indeed I loved reading this very much thank you for posting. ^_^


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Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Mimozi
Mimozi

Dublin, Ireland



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Born and raised in Montana, Bulgaria but living, working, dreaming and struggling in Dublin, Ireland for over a decade. Writing is something I have always enjoyed doing and never did enough of. It was.. more..

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