If you could! Would You?

If you could! Would You?

A Poem by Mind Giant
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Our choices affect everything that we are

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What would u do?

A Thousand questions rush through, like a shot of adrenaline forced into your vains, while forcefuly tied to the bed frame, a bad case of S&M.

If you could step out side yourself and look inside the person that is left? Would you smile or will you frown on what you found? If you could pick your time piece and turn back the hands of time, can you picture to where you would rewind?
Would you take those angry words back, would you back your friend up? Would you say your sorry? Would you be there for that one you loved and tell them don't worry? Would you pay back that money you owe? Would you help that homeless person you saw? If you had a million dollars? What would you do? Would you feed the poor? Or would you get wealthier by buying stock in companies that build weapons for war? If you had one wish, if I did I would ask for one more kiss! Would you wish for world peace? Would you ask for H.I.V to cease? Or would you ask to spend the rest of your days in some island you bought over seas?

What would you do? Would you adopt if you could not have your own kids? Give those children a chance to live and a chance to persuit their own happines? Would you do any of this if you could? And if you do, do not stop at the I should...

If you turn back the hands of your watch, all you will get is the wrong time

© 2010 Mind Giant


Author's Note

Mind Giant
Just some of my old writings

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Truthful! I like this. Makes the reader think. I love the questioning thoughts. It is true that the choices we make affects us.. and our world. It's nearly impossible to turn back the time.. but we all must move forward right? How interesting thoughts here. I enjoyed the read. =)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mind Giant

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this, and right you are about moving forward. we must .. read more
Sleeping Maiden

9 Years Ago

ha ha. no problem. I enjoyed it so much! AH yes, that is true... but i know its never easy to "move .. read more



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Good question brought to life in this poem. I believe when we learn greed will lead us to a dead end. Life will be better. Many people learn too late. What is truly important. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so insightful. You write beautifully, and this story is something i think i could read a hundred times. Thank you for posting it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mind Giant

9 Years Ago

Thank you for youre kind words. I am glad that you liked it. Where you able to relate to it.
This was awesome.
I really liked reading this, that I ended up reading it twice. To me, I see regret written all over and the feeling was well expressed, too.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mind Giant

9 Years Ago

thank you so much cassandra, youre words are very kind. Yes you are right. regret of those things th.. read more
Cassandra D.

9 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Keep that pen going...
- Cassandra D.
Truthful! I like this. Makes the reader think. I love the questioning thoughts. It is true that the choices we make affects us.. and our world. It's nearly impossible to turn back the time.. but we all must move forward right? How interesting thoughts here. I enjoyed the read. =)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mind Giant

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this, and right you are about moving forward. we must .. read more
Sleeping Maiden

9 Years Ago

ha ha. no problem. I enjoyed it so much! AH yes, that is true... but i know its never easy to "move .. read more
It's pretty good. I liked it. It seemed more like just a bit of thoughts than anything, but still pretty good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Mind Giant

Miami, FL



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