Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5
going.going.gone

going.going.gone

A Poem by Misa Uchiha

Tears through the broken glass

 

fear in ever shadow cast

 

my life outlined on deaths window pane

 

is my life one big game

 

smiles in your face

 

cries in the dark

 

laughs at the jokes

 

but im breaking apart

 

someone there, im knocking on your door

 

open up before im no more

 

i couldnt adovid it am i not smart

 

 now im dying of a broken heart

© 2008 Misa Uchiha


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Tears through broken glass should be capture in a small cup and splashed over some dying plant, to return life.
Life seems a game when there are players that spoil it for everyone. But in the end they are the ones who lose. Because they will never find love. Only temporary pleasure and eventually painful departures.
Oh gosh... you really tear me up. Its so sad...
Who wouldn't open the door? Keep knocking, because someone that cares will let you in where it's warm.

The important thing is you are smarter from these feelings. They teach us how to continue. They show us what we are really looking for.

Such a sad piece... but you are not gone yet. You are going, and going but hopefully this message is a way of pulling you from your own pit.

Beautifully sad, and in a colorful way. Which gives a strange feeling. This should inspire heroes to act.

Posted 14 Years Ago


man that was so sad to hear for someone that is so loved. it sounds like u need a hug.

Posted 15 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

256 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on November 28, 2008

Author

Misa Uchiha
Misa Uchiha

Staten Island ny, NY



About
Im 15 years old my name is charlene ....oh my freind is cyara a.k.a saruno Uchiha...shes my sister in law.her and sasuke are married(again lol)I love to laugh and make jokes i also love to hang out wi.. more..

Writing