A Poem by Misa Uchiha

Tears through the broken glass


fear in ever shadow cast


my life outlined on deaths window pane


is my life one big game


smiles in your face


cries in the dark


laughs at the jokes


but im breaking apart


someone there, im knocking on your door


open up before im no more


i couldnt adovid it am i not smart


 now im dying of a broken heart

© 2008 Misa Uchiha

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Tears through broken glass should be capture in a small cup and splashed over some dying plant, to return life.
Life seems a game when there are players that spoil it for everyone. But in the end they are the ones who lose. Because they will never find love. Only temporary pleasure and eventually painful departures.
Oh gosh... you really tear me up. Its so sad...
Who wouldn't open the door? Keep knocking, because someone that cares will let you in where it's warm.

The important thing is you are smarter from these feelings. They teach us how to continue. They show us what we are really looking for.

Such a sad piece... but you are not gone yet. You are going, and going but hopefully this message is a way of pulling you from your own pit.

Beautifully sad, and in a colorful way. Which gives a strange feeling. This should inspire heroes to act.

Posted 13 Years Ago

man that was so sad to hear for someone that is so loved. it sounds like u need a hug.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Misa Uchiha
Misa Uchiha

Staten Island ny, NY

Im 15 years old my name is charlene ....oh my freind is cyara a.k.a saruno Uchiha...shes my sister in law.her and sasuke are married(again lol)I love to laugh and make jokes i also love to hang out wi.. more..