loves pain

loves pain

A Poem by Misa Uchiha


Things that bloom

seasons sweet tune

baby cries

mircles arise

things to come

loves undone

my sunset

his fun

heart achs

pains awake

lovely lie

silent cry

tears heart

fake smile

moves on

pain never gone............



© 2009 Misa Uchiha

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I love this. It's really good.

One of my favorites I've ever read on here. :)

Only thing I can think to say is check the spelling.

Posted 13 Years Ago

What an amazing piece! I loved it! Great use of rhyme! Love's pain is so painful, yet you've created a beautiful poem! Wonderful writing! :D

Posted 13 Years Ago

Thank you
Babsie Bee xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


Posted 13 Years Ago

This grabbed my heart.
So well done.
I don't even know what else to say, but this really appeals to me.
My word, nicely done.
"things to come
loves undone
my sunset
his fun" - This part of it just jumped out at me.
It just paints such a vivid imaginative picture for me.
Really though, great work.

Yours truly,

Posted 13 Years Ago

nice misa it sound real good unlike most of mine. ^///^

Posted 14 Years Ago

this is an interesting style. Stecatto lines that paint an image of a story thru projecting short flashes into the mind. Very well rounded and complete. I like

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on February 21, 2009
Last Updated on February 21, 2009


Misa Uchiha
Misa Uchiha

Staten Island ny, NY

Im 15 years old my name is charlene ....oh my freind is cyara a.k.a saruno Uchiha...shes my sister in law.her and sasuke are married(again lol)I love to laugh and make jokes i also love to hang out wi.. more..


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