The light i see

Swift and smooth

like no human can stroll,

screeching of wheels

made me wonder how,

it stopped by my window,

did it ever walk?

i never took my eyes away

and it never seemed to stop,

never noticed the color;

i knew i could not,

now and then it smiles

eyes dance and spark,

it enjoys the wind

which seems its part,

i am sure nothing can touch;

it's promised to be apart,

city lights penetrate through it,

when world's too bright it's gone,

when i struck with awe it smiles

sends me back my reflection and disguise,

no i never blink to lose the glimpse

and forget the journey,

no matter it's how long,

it cherish me all way

and it knows what i want,

colors come and nest its eyes

as thoughts do to my mind,

plays and swirls

touches leaves and blew away,

it feels so powerful

controlling the air all on way 

its beautiful i know

though i doubt its girl

i smile at the thought

and it disappears as;

my senses ask me,

is it true? no its not!

the journey ends

and i close my eyes,

each time i see her

i am never surprised,

i revise this all

and a question that rise

did it ever meet you

in your several miles.

Author's Note

the question is true ike the imagination i tried to describe.

Reviews

[Maan]

You're good, I really like it. And I wonder if its your first poem as you're new here. I like the contrast of words and imagination you have put in it to link yourself with something your's.

is it true? no its not!

It is true if you want to believe if it is true, it isn't if you don't want to. If that something have belonged to me. I would be really keen to believe that is real. Because what is real is not real so how about believing in something that is unreal but real. It can be a truth that you can keep instead of facts you carry on your shoulders everyday and their burden is getting heavier each day. Don't you think it's light and beautiful, faithful and honest. A lot to say but I just like to wrap it up with a suggestion that FEEL, that's it and you'll be on your way to good.

In the end again, very nice poem, wonderful imaginations. It kept me through out and left me like a wanderer in its beauty. Keep writing.

Maan

[Mi]

thanks Maan , u r as appreciating as always :)

[David Scott]

This made me think of the reflections of a prism hanging in the bedroom window. Very lovely.
Be well.

[~Dragon X]

Wow, I really enjoyed this piece. I like the words used, it made my mind wander.
It brought up a lot of thoughts and the poem had a nice meaning.

Very nice! ^^

[Chris]

I liked the thoughts this one brought to my mind.

[Kes]

This is really great poem; I really enjoyed it. :)
You've done a great job.
K

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts and the picture gave some life to the poem. I like the description and the desire of this poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Pax]

brilliant and captivating. great job.

[Serena]

:o i fell in love with this poem

[Mi]

thanks :)

[Serena]

your welcome