Rain

Rain

A Poem by 水希

Rain
It falls down
Gently or beating
No discrimination of those beneath
Fluidly shaping to all it touches
Absorbed and being absorbed
A natural give and take
Cleansing and granting life
Constantly felt yet unfeeling
Coursing through the living
Unacknowledged
Yet the basis of all life
Some run for cover
I take it in

© 2014 水希


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This poem is so profound! I really like the line "Constantly felt yet unfeeling", it adds to the enigmatic effect. Very well done! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


水希

7 Years Ago

Thank you! I wanted to vaguely express more or less a paradox in giving rain a feeling of life even .. read more

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Added on June 13, 2014
Last Updated on June 13, 2014
Tags: Rain, life, basis of life, rainfall, water, fluid, pure, cleansing

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水希
水希

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Hello, I guess. I'm 19. I write mostly dark and deep poetry, but I'm not averse to other genres. Reviews are cool. I take criticism well. I don't mind talking to others, so that's okay too. I like art.. more..

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