Tangled

Tangled

A Poem by The Tea Party Mouse.
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Inspired by a poem my mother once told me in Spanish. Another hand at a haiku.

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Tell me. (Please, be true.)

How you feel, before I get

Tangled up in you

© 2010 The Tea Party Mouse.


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I love this! It's so simple yet tells an entire story. This is awesome! Great work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is very good! You mastered it perfectly and it makes sense (I have read some haikus and could not figure out what they were trying to say..) Great great job!! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh I did NOT know this was here I liked it of course I will admit I don't know anything about haikus XD

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 26, 2010
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The Tea Party Mouse.
The Tea Party Mouse.

Denver, CO



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