I Am

I Am

A Poem by MissEpic2902

I am strong,

Yet some say that must be wrong.

I am curious,

Yet I am also a little superstitious.

I am kind,

Yet some say I rarely speak my mind.

I am learning,

And many say I learn by doing.

I am driven,

Yet when things fall apart, I sometimes feel ready to give in.

I am a writer,

Yet some don’t understand that when I write I feel inspired.

I am eager,

Yet some say my efforts are meager.

I am smart,

Yet some say my intelligence isn’t my best art.

I am an invention,

Motivated by creation, and unique in my intentions.

I am all of these things,

Yet I am none of these things.

I am creative,

I am free,

I am, of any of these things, me.

© 2012 MissEpic2902


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I loved this. A very simple poem, but none the less powerful for it. The ending was absolutely perfect. Beautiful. We are all more than the combination of our perceived attributes. Thank you so much for sharing this, it was a very enjoyable read. Keep up the good work ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This really good!!! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
It's a wonder how words so small and so simple can amount to so much! A lovely poem... Keep it up! :)


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

Thank you!! :)
Another brilliant piece of work, not on the same level but have a look at my piece, my creative Ego, every writers nightmare?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

thank you! Your work is really great too!
hogan

9 Years Ago

thanks, trying to sort out an edited version of the book The 4 dreams of Leonardo, having justifica.. read more
MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

No problem! :)
this is simply beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
dunnia

9 Years Ago

your welcome:)
Thank you all for all of your reviews!! I really appreciate every one of them!! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


nice work...nice thoughts...the ending says it all...

I am creative,

I am free,

I am, of any of these things, me.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really touched me...Nice way to express yourself...
The best part is the way you concluded...succinct and true.
My only wish is to see a better rhyme length to this awesome creation.
AG

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amen! I couldn't put it into words, but you did. It's perfect, I wouldn't change a thing.
Love,
CreativeCookie

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Astounding best I am piece I have seen in years flawless rhythm beautiful portrayal of a human being and an individual at that!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Holy noodles this is amazing! I couldn't turn from it until it was done! Truly amazing! Purely brilliant! It was captivating but at some points I found a little rocky, maybe it was me but I wasn't most keen on the "I am learning" "yet I learn by doing" I think if you replaced the second learn to something else it would maintain the flow and still assure us of the poems contradiction? But an amazing peice of art.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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MissEpic2902

Yorkville , IL



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16 years old, loves to cook, write, sing, dance, read, I'm pretty much up for anything!! I'm kind to everyone I meet unless you creep me out or tick me off then i might not be your best friend lol!! b.. more..

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