Hell's Fire

Hell's Fire

A Poem by MissEpic2902
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Based on my day..

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Self doubt Burn's inside me every time
It burns like hell's fire when ever I try
to stand up for myself against those who hate me for the weirdness that is mine
I do not know why
I guess they like to torture me
each time I'm against a wall
I want to tell them to leave me be
yet every time I lose the courage and just try not to fall
So the hell fire in my chest remains
till the day I say I've had enough
It travel's like fire through my veins
Yet it refuses be released, like a mother wolf holding her pup by her scruff
I await that day in silent anticipation
And in silent trepidation

© 2012 MissEpic2902


Author's Note

MissEpic2902
Yeah, I haven't had the best of days.. No flames guys, please and thank you!!

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Pax
very sad... and heartfelt my friend..
I'm blown away with your imagery and fire...
great job!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

Thank you! I really appreciate what you've said! :)
Heartfelt, very emotion, excellent work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! :)
that is a really great poem. nice words picking symbols and metaphors

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much i appreciate this!! :)
I think my "getting even" poem should be a muse for you...describes how I read this submission..bye the way its good..your submission.laury

Posted 9 Years Ago


MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
I hope those people burn in your hellfire the second you unleash it, this made me upset to think that people would do that to you... why anyone would do that to anybody?! It just never made sense to me...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate what you've said :)
I await that day
in silent anticipation.
Nice write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
wow powerful...sad...and horrid events

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

Yeah, Thank you for your review!
 Soul Fire

9 Years Ago

You're welcome
MissEpic2902

9 Years Ago

:)

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Added on October 16, 2012
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MissEpic2902
MissEpic2902

Yorkville , IL



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16 years old, loves to cook, write, sing, dance, read, I'm pretty much up for anything!! I'm kind to everyone I meet unless you creep me out or tick me off then i might not be your best friend lol!! b.. more..

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