Listen

"Listen to me,

Listen to me,

Listen to me."

Opinions,

Believes,

Thoughts.

Filling my brain.

I listen,

Listen,

Listen 

To them.

But with all of their

Ideas,

Will there be any room for

My own?

Author's Note

Written for a contest. Once again, this is my stab in the dark. I'd love it if you let me know what you think!

Reviews

[Young Mountain]

I wanted the idea to carry out more.

I loved the structure of the piece. When I read it a 2nd and 3rd time it resonated more with me. I also loved the end to this short, it fit nicely.

[SilentDreamer]

I love the last line, "But with all their ideas will there be any room for my own?" Very good question to ask yourself and it makes you think. Easy to relate to, different sort of poem. The picture kind of goes with the idea of a chaotic sort of world. Interesting/ creative poem that made me kind of think/ wonder. Great job.