She's not me...

She's not me...

A Poem by Sarah
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A typical poem about a girl who likes a guy but the guy has a girlfrind whom the girl doesn't like.

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I see you walking by, but I don't say a word.

I just stare into you face, like an open road.

And I wonder, if you'll ever like me.

'Cuz your always so busy with the other girl, that isn't me.

 

One day all of that will change,

But for now I have to suffer with with the range

Of you and her.

You relationship is on and off just like a blurr.

© 2009 Sarah


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I like a lot of people can relate. Nice work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice poem..like it

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great poem! I really liked it! Very emotional! I loved the choice of wording that you used! Wonderful poem! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's the age old story. But it is still fresh for all that. Millions wld know exactly the feelings you capture here and nod is silent sympathy.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 26, 2009

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Sarah
Sarah

Toronto, Ontairo, Canada



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I'm just a young, curious, experimental 14 year old. I love to write, especially poems. I write whatever is on my mind. I don't hold back. I'm wild. I'm crazy. I'm fun. I'm everything in one person. I.. more..

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