Falling In Love

Your words so sweet
makin' my heart skip beats.
Telling me how you truly feel,
couldn't make this more real
I like you, maybe even more.
Your life may not be perfect,
but you're perfectly perfect for me.
You say these sweet things, all for me
Your making me fall in love with you.
You say that you'll always love me
and that there's not enough words to
describe your love for me.
But maybe you can see
how I truly feel,
cause' I might love you.

Reviews

[Emerald Seas]

This is so adorable, a shy innocent love. Nicely done

[Just Jayren]

The use of the word perfect really done it for me... Good work

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sweet work. Heartfelt and lyrical.
Lovely candid expressions.

i love it, its written more from the heart and i love that about this poem

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I truly love this and can relate to it. Every word spoke to me :) Great job!!

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

Wow this is so sweet!

[Jordan's Back]

Adorable, and Makes one so emotional they could cry! An Awesome write!

[Kelly M.]

This is adorable. Loved every word of it. I hope this is a true poem, though I can tell it was written from the heart. (:

[jennifer little]

wonderful work keep it up loved reading this poem