Improv

The most beautiful shape you can make with your lips


Is one that has no lines


To define, to intensify, it holds no ground


Yet is strong and helps you speak to me


In words that silk my fair skin into deep, deeper, deepest


Denial of ever loving love so tender


As it does when I love you.

Reviews

[John Fitzgerald]

very beautiful. sexy in a strong, feline sense. the first line stands alone perfectly.

[Brittany]

Interesting.

I read this and first was thinking, "no lines".... .... ... are the lines you speak of words/sounds?

All in all I enjoyed this piece, it's short, sexy in it's briefness, and finishes so sweetly.

[Eagle Cruagh]

"The most beautiful shape you can make
with your lips is one that has no lines."

Hmmmmmm ?

This required a second, then a third reading.

I could write a book using just the few words
you have left here. Expressive, brief, descriptive,
subtle and sweet.

A very, very expressive poem.

Thank you ,

------ Eagle Cruagh

[Leap]

Beautiful and simplistic.

[Kelsey Desmond]

Wow! Amazing!

[Melissa Kesead]

Short but to the point. I look forward to reading more!