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A Poem by Speak in Silence

I know you try hard
I know that we both know pain,
I wish you could stay.

© 2012 Speak in Silence


Author's Note

Speak in Silence
This was actually meant for my dad before I thought out who he REALLY was. Now I take this poem in a whole different perspective. Now this is meant for my best friend who lives almost 2,000 miles away. We were going to see each other, but never got a chance. This is for you Brice I love ya, always will :)

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i can relate to this on many levels....very cool


Posted 8 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
The one form of poetry I can't do (and usually don't like). but this is AMAZING. powerful and it makes sense. you didn't use a strange word to make the right amount of syllables

Posted 8 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Very nice haiku. I enjoyed reading this. Hopefully you will see your friend soon.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
sometimes a few words say so much, just like here. Well done......

Posted 8 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
I really like this! Great haiku. They can be very difficult, and you nailed this one! Good job, keep writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

8 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Erin Thomas

8 Years Ago

You're welcome!
short and sweet, gets the point across. Well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
That_Guy

8 Years Ago

You're welcome ;)
Wow I liked how you got the message in with so little words. It's very well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

8 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Vampyre of Fantasy

8 Years Ago

You're welcome:)

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