November 14th, 2007

Damn, I haven't been down this street since I was a kid. Our house burnt down when I was six and then we had to live here...on Crest street. There was one place you didn't like in the whole city, ONE and we lived there. For eight years. I ended up moving out at fourteen. I lived with my aunt for a while, then she evicted from her apartment. She was heartbroken. She always had one dream, live in New York City, but that dream got shattered after two years.

Walking down this road gives me the chills, remembering all the violence and drugs that went on here. I have avoided this street for ten years, I know why too. But then I saw the most unbelievable thing....

Author's Note

Sorry I didn't get it up sooner, been kinda stressed but I hope you all like it :)

Reviews

[Talismanic]

I love how you put just the right amount of detail into each entry. And you leave things on a question, so that we just have to turn the page to find out... a little more, a little more... augggghhh there's no more pages!!! It's like following a trail of jellybeans (sorry m a little sugar high:)p

[Speak in Silence]

Haha thanks :) I am so glad everyone likes it :)

[Anonymous Girl]

Really want to find out what is "unbelievable thing"? Waiting for next chapter.
Keep writing :)

[Speak in Silence]

Glad you like it:)

[Anonymous Girl]

Its okay :)

[Hester Vane]

Whats the unbeliveable thing?!!! Cant wait to read more!

[Speak in Silence]

Haha glad you liked it :)

[Inci 2]

nice!!

[Speak in Silence]

Thanks :)

[Inci 2]

welcome :))

[Panda11598]

Sorry I haven't commented on the other chapters. I haven't been on here in a while. This is a really creative idea for a book. And I like the fact that it's told from someone else's perspective, not Jane Doe's. So far, I want more! :) Great job! Keep it coming!

[Speak in Silence]

Oh its okay, I haven't been on as often as I have wanted either, thanks :)