Alice

Alice

A Poem by Speak in Silence

My mind is filled with thoughts I cannot say
My thoughts are filled with actions I cannot display
I've always let you down with my filthy habits
I'm caught in a lie...
Call me Alice
Call me anything...anything but myself
Conscience a killer
"Find yourself, help yourself...bring yourself home"
My soul can do nothing but run...nothing but hide
Maybe I'm done, maybe I'm gone

Disapate into thin air like shadows to Rome...
But you scream whispers in my ear...
"Hold on.."

© 2013 Speak in Silence


Author's Note

Speak in Silence
I'm so glad to be back! I haven't even attepted to write anything since November (and even the one I wrote and posted on here I thought was awful)...BUT I do have reasoning my good people. I've been going through more personal problems than I usually have had to deal with, but that's a story for another day. Plus I've had a bit of writer's block.

I was listening to the song: Intensity in ten cities by Chiodos when I thought of this idea. This poem is a snipet of some of the things I have been experencing. I really hope everyone enjoys! I hopefully will be writing more soon but I do have other activities I have to attend to now but I promise not to forget about you!

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Belief and his arms reached out from the falls at Devils Court House,the spells of the rhododendron seemed a potion his lips parted just so ,can't he hear,I am gone why hang on,I am gone why pull me back under the waterfall ? My all consuming why ?

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow, so powerful!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

8 Years Ago

Thanks!
 Soul Fire

8 Years Ago

You're welcome!
'I'm caught in a lie...
Call me Alice
Call me anything...anything but myself
Conscience a killer"
Nice flow of thoughts and I like the strong ending. Thank you for the excellent poem. I enjoyed this poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

8 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read and review!
Wah, great piece that you've got there (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

8 Years Ago

Thanks for taking the time to read and review!
Rhianne Ney

8 Years Ago

You're welcomezzzz
greatly enjoy,

Posted 8 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

8 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed!
I really like this. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Speak in Silence

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
Great to have you back. And a great poem come back with! Full of emotion and a great use of language!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

8 Years Ago

It's great to be back! Thank you for taking the time to read and review and I hope to read some of y.. read more
Sometimes that inner voice that's dying to heard can be louder the conscious thoughts within the screamer. You illustrated this well in this unique and creative poem. Great job. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Speak in Silence

8 Years Ago

Thank you much!
Glad to have you back hun :) this poem is great. I love the concept and I can relate to the feeling. It's very dark and intense, and the rhyming is excellent. Brilliant write

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Speak in Silence

8 Years Ago

Thanks a ton. I'm so glad to be back and I look forward to reading some of your latest work!
Lina Grey

8 Years Ago

You're welcome :)

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Added on February 15, 2013
Last Updated on February 16, 2013
Tags: myself, habits, cutting, Alice, thoughts, actions, killer, consceince, nothing, hide, run, soul, yourself, whispers

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