Who Killed the Teenager?

Who Killed the Teenager?

A Poem by Speak in Silence

Teenagers 
Society's b***h
Underweighted fame
Just to get rich 

"Society's perfect!"
"Society's fucked."
All different opinions
Most out of luck

Cuts, bruises, burns
"It was the cat"
"It was an accident" 
All because you called her fat..

Blood, tears
The war wages on
All secrets hidden away
Before the the break of dawn

"I told my mom,
But she didn't believe.
Everything was always hidden
Under my sleeve."

"Mom I don't eat.
He called me fat."

"Hmm sounds like you,
Always someone's stepping mat."

Craving cutting, wanting more
Don't you remember what we're fighting for?

Forgive, forget
That's what seems to be right
"I'll write this letter for you for mom,
Incase I don't return tonight."


She cried for help
But no one seemed to listen

Starved to death
Bled to death
There's no change.
Loss caused by society,
Who killed the teenager.

© 2013 Speak in Silence


Author's Note

Speak in Silence
This is basically the thing no one wants to here right? Why? Because it's the truth. No one ever wants to know the truth. All they want is the candy coated lies.
But anyways, I wrote this because I think people need to know the truth, ya know?

I hope everyone likes. Please review and thank you for reading<3

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This is definitely the truth that needs to be heard. Reminds me of the movie "Bully." You should watch it. It's a real tear-jerker.
Excellent poem! I like that bit at the end where
it
goes
like
this.
Very emotional piece. Nicely written!

100/100
~Abbey Road
:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

10 Years Ago

I've heard of it but never got around to watching it! Thank you for reading
Westminster Abbey

10 Years Ago

It's on Netflix if that helps :)
Kids have it hard. They see perfection. Hard to be. Poem told a story for many. We need to stay positive and teach our children to like who they are. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

10 Years Ago

I agree totally. Thank you for reading and reviewing
As a teenager I can relate to this very much. You're right about no one wanting to hear the truth, but someone has to let it out.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

10 Years Ago

Agreed.
Society influences young people in so many ways and sometimes I think people forget that. This poem should remind people of what they forgot. I wish people would see the truth more often than they do. Great poem, you did an amazing job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

10 Years Ago

Thank you
society influences young people in many things, that is why we should know and understand ourselves first...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Myenigma

11 Years Ago

its just part of growing up....,do things that make you happy :) things do get better, and don't let.. read more
Speak in Silence

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the advice
Myenigma

11 Years Ago

yea another thing i agree with is how we have high expectations of life, how we are all going to be .. read more
Riveting and compelling at the same time. The truth is what sets you free. Unfortunately nowadays in society no one wants to here it because our emotions tend to get the best of us. Great write. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

11 Years Ago

Very true. Thank you for reading and reviewing

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Added on April 11, 2013
Last Updated on April 11, 2013
Tags: teen, teenager, fat, society, problems, cutting, self harming, eating disorders

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