Last Night Alive

Deep ocean blue

Carry me up from your depths

Deep ocean blue

Carry me away from the untrue

Unspoken goodbyes

Heartfelt tears I've only cried

No more late nights

Just be honest and say they were lies

So I'll spend my last night dreaming of you

And I'll cry my last tears over you

I'll write my last words to you

And I'll dry the blood from my veins because of you

Reviews

[Taylor Ann]

I love everything about this poem. I love the image it paints in my mind and the flow of the words.
This is a beautiful piece. Keep it up :)

[Fréyjä Helv..]

I could relate this to my present situation...

[Hester Vane]

Very lyrical and melodic! A beautiful piece of work! Wonderful

[Speak in Silence]

Awe thank you!

[sierrasparks91]

wonderfully written it flows easily.

[Speak in Silence]

Thank you

[Rhianne Ney]

Nicely written emotions splattering the page like paint splattering a canvass. Nice poem (:

[Speak in Silence]

Thanks!

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome~

[NITHIN PURPLE]

who is that is it for a lover...ha ha

[Speak in Silence]

Aha, yes

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Releasing the pain is the only way to move on... otherwise that pain becomes an anchor dragging you to the bottom of the ocean.

[Speak in Silence]

That is so true.

[B-poet]

What a captivating and compelling write. Great work. :)

[Speak in Silence]

Thanks(: