Broken Butterflies

Broken Butterflies

A Poem by Speak in Silence

© 2013 Speak in Silence


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Wow!? o.O this is good...Makes you think back to your childhood, I would catch fireflies as well; not much of
butterflies. But in a sense the butterfly makes you see just how fragile life is...How precious it is. I give you 100/100!!! nice job ^.~

Posted 6 Years Ago


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this is so good! It captures every emotion in me I love it

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow!? o.O this is good...Makes you think back to your childhood, I would catch fireflies as well; not much of
butterflies. But in a sense the butterfly makes you see just how fragile life is...How precious it is. I give you 100/100!!! nice job ^.~

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the title of this poem. It caught my eye. Im not a grammar nazi by any means but I did catch a spelling error you may want to fix. "Lye" is a chemical combound use for washing or cleansing, I believe you meant "lie". I could be mistaken on your intended use of the word, if so my bad. Anywho, as for the poem itself I thought it was rather interesting. A great use of metaphor, and it paints a nice vivid image. Over all, a well written piece. :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


I loved how I was able to vision this all in my head. I wouldn't catch butterflies, but I would catch fireflies some nights when it was dark out. We would catch them in a jar, then let them go when we were going to head inside to bed. I bet butterflies would be just as beautiful being trapped in a jar.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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This is a very self reflecting piece. I just hope you are not trapped in a jar lol

Posted 6 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

6 Years Ago

Haha, no. I'm not (:
I like the use of butterflies to make your point. We can get caged up and forget what freedom was. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


I love this!!! It's so beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


its nice, but even inside a jar butterflys are still magnificent

Posted 6 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

6 Years Ago

I agree, they are beautiful
Very, very, true. I remember one time as a kid I held a funeral for a butterfly that I did that too. I think back to it and feel kinda silly. Now that I read this. I feel like you, that I'm very much like them.
Very Inspirational

Posted 6 Years Ago


Speak in Silence

6 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad someone can relate xx

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