Save Me Please

Save Me Please

A Poem by Mistaken
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didn't come out right either..grrr

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My heart beats for you

yet is breaking without you...

 

Can you save me?

Heal me before all hope is gone?

 

I love you with all my soul

without having seen you before...

 

You feel me when I need you

And love me while im away.

 

Now all thats left is to meet

and see each other face to face....

 

I hope you don't try to hide

So I won't be alone and left to cry.

 

My fears you'll find

only you can fix....

 

Please save me from who i am

Save me from what I am without you.

© 2010 Mistaken


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Mistaken
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My opinion is that this is amazing. That's my opinion



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've felt this way before, so personally, I liked it very much. I liked your phrasing and I liked the different type.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it. being alone isnt always easy...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think we all yearn for that person. Very nice write. I love the last line. Brilliant

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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