Swallowed By A Note

 

Yea!...I have seen beyond the moon and the stars.. Unfathomed....Amidst their fairyland dust..... Whereat shimmering eyes ~ Lay 'neath the scars... Tugging at the serpent winds....Undying trust... Yea I have seen... What thou hast never seen... A callow crag ~ Hanging from a jointed limb.... Next breasted meadows...And the garden between.. Swallowed by a soft note ~ From shadows dim.. Seen...Yet never heard amidst the gravel... Of this earth..That holds the seas mid their doom.. That lays as a sleeping hill ~ Against all... Unfondly expressed...Like craven perfume.. Lying in wait....Mid the arrant universe.... Aside my null mind ~ And unwonted verse...

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Yea!...I have seen beyond the moon and the stars..
Unfathomed....Amidst their fairyland dust.....
Whereat shimmering eyes ~ Lay 'neath the scars..."

I like the soft classic feel to this write...Bravo

[Cranky Old Bear]

THank You very Much... I have written about 1700 or so poems.. I have got about 1400 on my site... Been posting mostly older ones lately before my wife passsed away.. Deleted a couple hundred and passed by a few that were not worthy.. If you ever want to stop by there is a link for my poems on bfootjohn.com .. I haven't been feeling well today. hope I get to feeling better tomorrow.. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).............

[deeps]

I really enjoyed the emotion in this one
Very well written and so expressive.