Empty No More

A poem I wrote literally two minutes ago.

 

Empty words,

From an empty person.

That is what I once was.

 

Nothingness,

That is what I once felt.

 

Then you came.

 

I began to feel,

That gap fill in.

 

I was no longer empty,

And the mask began to fall.

 

The mask I had almost become,

You helped me escape,

That never-ending life of nothingness.

 

These words are now backed by emotion,

My actions are now my own.

 

I’ve always been afraid of change,

But this change,

I welcomed with open arms.

Author's Note

What ya think?

Reviews

[M_S_Lay]

I think that the feeling of hope and love is evident throughout.. good job