Who am I?

Who am I?

A Poem by Dokuro-chan (Toeto-chan)

I don't understand what is the big deal?

Just because I like somone who's so much older

People tell me it's wrong

People say I'll get raped

But no matter what I don't believe it

They call me w***e and a b***h

But they shouldn't be the ones to talk

Just because the age differece is alot

Doesn't make it forbidden love

Or does it?

Me being forbidden to date someone

It is kinda retarded

How people call me this names

Without really knowing what they mean

Because if they really knew what those names meant

They wouldn't call me it

Because they know that, that is not me

That isnt't how my intentions are

Maybe they think that

But those are just lies

If they really knew me

They would know

Who I am truely

I just remembered that my own parents are 8 years apart

And yet they question my thoughts

And they question my friends

On how I act

And who I truely am

Serious?

My own mom doesn't know me anymore

I don't get this weird, quere new world.

© 2010 Dokuro-chan (Toeto-chan)


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people like to talk stupid stuff when they don't understand or simply jealous about it. Age is nothing is just a number for everyone and love is another thing that does not look that. Love is very pure and as long as you two love each other the world can talk crap and all but you still have each other is the best part. Problems always come ( I don't know why) but you have to conquer them all.

Posted 9 Years Ago


You're exactly right. If you truely love this person, and he truley loves you, that's all you need. Just because you are unlucky to be born when you were shouldn't mean you can't date somebody. And my parents are 12 years apart.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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