Hope

Hope

A Poem by Dokuro-chan (Toeto-chan)

Life is just a another way to choose

Whether you go to heaven or hell

And if you sit around wonderin what to do

Don't come crying to me

When you realize

You shouldn't make a scene

Over what is just a grain of sand

But at the time it seems like

A huge mountain

And when you search for something your whole life

You realize you already had it in your hands

And in the end of the day

I see how stupid I was to be

Even thinkin' 'bout you and me

But life is just another way

For you to decide whether

You go to heaven or hell

You shouldn't cry

Over a thing so small

And you shouldn't worry

Because this speaks the truth

There's ways to determine

What happens when you die

If you're a good little girl or boy

And you do your best to do right

All of your life

You will live at the top

But don't let something

So small

Sink your dreams down the drain

Let your choices determine

Where you go

When you die

Of old age

Of sickness

Or from being murdered

But as long as you

Pray and keep

Relieing on yourself

And in god

You will see

Only you have the power

To change your future

Only god knows what will happen

But only you can change what's wrong

Only you can keep your dreams

And stop crying

Over a small

Piece of what the problem really is

'Cuz at the time

It's so easy to get sucked into

What seems nothing afterward

 

© 2010 Dokuro-chan (Toeto-chan)


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Is really great and is right life is just choosing path to make our own we can't be dramatic of the changes and stuff that happen because is part of it. Somethings are good and other sucks but it is part of it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Loved it! Very good job! Keep it up


Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful job!! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hope is necessary. Better to live life to the fullest and be kind. Better to worry about where we will end when we get there. Will add to the burden of life already. I like the ending. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey there r some lytrics 4rm "so small" in here by carrie underwood. it makes me wonder... other than there is some thT'S UR ORIGINALITY. (i HOPE, IDK) GOOD PPOEM THOGH, IT'S VERY MEANINGFUL. ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice poem. great read :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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