A Chapter by Dokuro-chan (Toeto-chan)

Alphonse Elric grabbed my hand right before I fell. He pulled me up, and I hugged him. He seemed puzzled by my happiness. I let go and said “Just my way of saying thanks. Thank you Alphonse, for everything. I really owe you a lot.” He smiled and we ran back to the other room to help Edward. We saw Edward fighting Evangeline, who had Koda held hostage. “Ed! Stand back!” I said as I used my alchemy to make my weapon appear, (a long purple sword with my initials on it), and I appeared behind Evangeline and stabbed her in the heart. As she fell and blood filled the floor, Ed and I found Koda, grabbed her, and we all ran home.    


      My name is Atheana Toeto Dokuro. Many people call me Atheana, or Toeto-chan. My best friends Koda and Edward recently met up with me, for we haven’t seen each other in years. Edward had been married to Koda for several years now, (or at least by the time I met them again). They have two children; Nina Elric (who is about 8 or at least I think so), and newly born Blake Elric.


     Edward Elric was my best friend ever since we were about toddlers. Then Koda moved to town and that was around the same time I had to move away. Edward soon fell deeply in love with Koda, but he didn’t know it at first. If I hadn’t moved I would have been Edward’s third wheel. Well… I’m his third wheel right now. We haven’t been getting along much lately; well anyways…this is my view of things.




© 2010 Dokuro-chan (Toeto-chan)

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A good start I can't wait to read more

Posted 10 Years Ago

Really great! Another story of the Elric brother. I keep on reading to see where is this leading. Good Work!

Posted 11 Years Ago

This seems good so far, nice prologue. i'll keep reading.

Posted 11 Years Ago

A very good start to the story. I shall read on.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Hm, this could be intresting. This is my first time reading a fanfic! ^^ The edward thing also remind me of my friend kisa who has a guy named edward in her story too. I guess it's an anime thing.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds interesting. And I love fan fic. Especially Fullmetal Alchemist! I can't wait to keep reading! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago

Yeah, considering he runs you over in the Shaws parking lot. :D


Posted 11 Years Ago

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